This was tough to read... but mostly because of your writing style.

Scroll through this article and look at it.

Not every sentence wants to be a standalone paragraph. And not every sentence wants to be the same exact length.

It's the visual and literary equivalent of speaking in a monotone.

You seriously need to learn how to group related thoughts together into a single paragraph. And break up your sentence and paragraph lengths. Some should be long.

Others, short.

Effective writing is having something to say--and having the skills to communicate it.